Week 11 objectives- Self Evaluation

Self Evaluation Template 

1.What score do you think you deserve?
   
   I think I deserve 1 point. My classical arguments are not logically, and my research is inadequate and not enough to support my arguments.    

2.What did you do well?

  I think my introduction is good. I use some adages to attract the audiences. And I think I use some interesting example to support my arguments.    

3.What could you have done better?

  I need to do more research about this topic, especially, finding some experts' ideas. And I should be based off of some personal feelings.  

 

4.Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

  I think my confirrmation is the best, which I used. Because there are three logical arguments and I use some interesting examples to support my opinions.

 

5.Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

  

  My narraion is very week. Because it does not have enough information to explain to readers.

6.What’s your strategy to make your second draft better?

  I should research more informtaions for every paragraph, and then I will correct some erro (some wrong grammars). After that,  I should make some good sentences to support my opinions, do not repeat the same sentences in the same paragraph. Finally, let me arrange my strategy, they are the first, researching, the second, finding grammar erroes, lastly, paraphrasing! Do not repeat the same sentences. (try)