Week 3 objects - Classical Argument Outline

1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.

   I will start with some adages aboutthe jealousy and talk about today we show this jealousy from our around people. Thus, I will show some data about people’s mortality and a crime rate due to jealousy. (Or show some data which is the rate of despondency people) This way is emphasizing that jealousy is dangerous emotion. And then, Iwill make a question that is relative with the topic such as "When are you feeling the jealousy?" or "How do you reaction in jealousy?" like this. Finally, I will end my introduction with "Jealousy is the most dangerous emotion for human mind".

2. The narration, which summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.

  I will compare the words’ definition, "envy"and "jealousy". At here, I will emphasize the dangerous of jealousy. Then, I will ask a question "why we will be jealousy other?"After that, I will tell you the types of jealousy, there are 3 types. End of the narration, I will say that people usually cannot control their emotion, especially jealousy. And we need to careful control it and recognize its dangerous. Even the people who are jealousy of others very stronger will no time to care himself and make him fall into suicide bombing.

3. The confirmation, which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.

I will argue three reasons why I insist jealousy is the most dangerous emotion for human mind.

1. Jealousy not only hurt other, but also hurt myself. (It makes me to fall into despondency. I will take some examples about jealousy hurts others.)

This reason's main point is jealousy hurts people. In detail, I will distinguish people such as myself and the other. Then, I will show some examples and data about each others and tell the readers the different effects of jealousy. First, jealousy hurts the other I will take some example about korean drama and some statistics (it is now days). Thus, I will go into detail about different types of jealousy how to affect to people. Most of them are hurting people. Second, I will show some examples that people feel despondency due to jealousy. And even some people choose suicide. (show some statistics)

http://trendhr.egloos.com/viewer/564514

(통계 자료-질투로 인한 사망률)

2. We accept the facts to distort due to jealousy.

http://www.catholictimes.org/view.aspx?AID=260532&ACID=719

(감자와 고구마 이야기)

I will take an example about people usually accept the facts to distort by themselves. And finding some experts' speech about it. Thus, I will explain why I said this argument. (Finding some funny examples)

3. Jealousy will raise social confusion.

http://blog.naver.com/maria8244?Redirect=Log&logNo=220160579696

(카인과 아벨 이야기)

I will show some example of the story of the Bible. ( And one accident happen in the korea.)(A boy killed a girl due to she deny his propose, even she deliberately makes a fake boyfriend, this behavior makes the boy jealousy. Finally, killing her.) These examples can make some people recognize the dangerous of jealousy. And I will insist most of mistakes or the emotion are based with jealousy.

4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.

I concede the opponents' argument that are talking about the jealousy is the motive to our behavior. It means the jealousy is our power. Then, I will show some examples about the excessive jealousy is not helping us to have a motive, but it will dangerous for people.

5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.

End of my article, I will briefly arrange my arguments(little bit stronger). Giving some solution, even though we cannot control our own emotion, especially jealousy. However, taking some experts' speech to tell readers. End of the summation, I will refer my thesis statement.