3. The confirmation, which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
My confirmation
According to the introduction and narration we can know one fact that is jealousy is a dangerous emotion. There are three reasons why I insist jealousy is the most dangerous emotion for human mind.
First, jealousy will hurt people. In detail, we can distinguish the people that are two types of them. They are myself and the others. First, jealousy hurt the others. When we watch the korean drama or some kinds of movies and books. The characters also are jealousy the other side. There are typical example about jealousy in the korean drama:
Lately, at the most popular korean drama "Qi Empress", we watch that in drama all of people are jealousy of others. For example, the king of Yuan Dynasty is jealousy the king of Goryeo. That was because of the one woman. We can find his feeling from his eyes and his behaviors. In addiction, because the deficiency of loving, the queen of Yuan Dynasty tries to kill her through an assassination.
Like this example, there is not also kill others. The king is revealed his jealousy through his emotion and behaviors. In contrast, the queen is revealed her jealousy through murder others. For this examples, we can know at the same situation and context, people show different reaction. Second, jealousy also can hurt myself. When I continuously compare myself with others, If I finish it through all of my efforts, I also think about "His result is better than me. I am poor at all of them, I am fool." Gradually, those who compare themselves with others will feel despondency, even those will choose suicide.
Second, we accept the facts to distort due to jealousy. People usually hear and see someone's other sides, such as when the students talk about a very pretty star. Then, you will say that her face is not a nature, she did a plastic surgery. Like this, you will deny the fact. This is also a funny story about denying the fact.
There is one sweet potato and one potato. Walking around the roads, they see a beautiful glutinous rice cake. Potato says, " Glutinous rice cake is very pretty. Look, her face is so fluffy and white!" However, the sweet potato think of herself and jealousy her, says "She is not pretty!" Hearing the chatter, glutinous rice cake is shy and avoiding the space. At that time, sweet potato see some white powder fall out from glutinous rice cake's body and says, "Look, that is making up!"
For this example, we can know one fact. When people jealousy others, they usually distort the facts. This story is only a light topic, however, when we come into our personal relationships or political problems, the result we cannot image.
Finally, jealousy will raise social confusion. Most of our bad emotions are coming from jealousy. For instance, upset, angry, sadness, despair and so on, we can feel them through jealousy. However, we cannot believe that the first of child in the world is a murder.(in the Bible) He also jealousy his only brother to make this result. Here are the story about them.
Temptation of Adam and Eve have two suns, they are Cain and Abel. Cain is a farmer and Abel is a shepherd boy. Both of them perform ancestral rites to God using their labor result. However, the God only accept Abel's one. That is because Cain only perform perfunctory, there is not any elaboration. But Cain cannot know his mistake, he is jealousy his brother. Finally, he kills his own brother, just due to jealousy.
Moreover, in the reality, there are also a lot of people killing others just due to jealousy, like Cain. We need to recognize our mistakes, thus, when we face with jealousy, first of all, it is not hurt or complain to others, it need to control your mind and contemplate yourself first. Then, it will not make any confusion for our society and country.
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